Tuesday, November 6, 2012

November 6

Topic: In the Beginning
Aim: What other tales are in Genesis? How do they answer the QUESTions? 

Write Now: Of human behavior what bothers you the most? Explain

What bothers me most of human behavior is that if we dont practice something it fades away...
Pollution,  think of themselves and et it whatever the cost




Tuesday, October 30, 2012

OCTOBER 30

Topic: In the Begginnig
Aim: Who is Noah? 
What does Noah say about us?
Write Now: Identify the register of this paragraph:

Register of Paragraph: This paragraph is informal register because it does not have slang words but it is not formal eather. 

Afermtive Action: race acceptance policy for the universities

-The covenant that God made with Noah : God said he would put a bow in the cloudssonhe could remmember nto ro flood or do anything else to harm humanity

-Compare Goldstein's understanding of these characteristics with our own
He mentioned the wives
No one believed Noah
He was called a dummy by his father
was obligated to marry
He believed his father was crazy
Shem: 
One of Noahs sons
He dressed his father when he was naked
Canaan will be his servant
Noah liked Shem more
One of the oldest

VOCAB: Covenant: agreement

Friday, October 26, 2012

October

OCTOBER 22
Topic: In the Beggining
Aim: Who is God in Book of Genesis? 
Gods book of Genesis is the explenation of the creation of the universe, and how man was created. 
Write Now: How did the universe begin? Explain
For me, theuniverse began with the big bang, though I also beleive that God is the creator of everything (he was the creator of the universe) 

GENESIS ANALISYS:

Timeline

 Ch 1:

-Day 1: God creates light and darkness, divides them, and therefore creates day and night. 
-Day 2: God then divided the waters from the firmament. 
-After he creates heaven and earth.
-Day 3: On the land he crested plant, fruits, and also animals
-He then created seasons, sighns, days and years
-Evening and morning
- Creates moon, sun, stars
-Creates birds and fish. Tells them to reproduce
-God creates beasts and cattle, 

Ch 2:

-Proud of his work
- God created man from the dust, and the breath of life, and man became a living soul
-Put the man in the garden of Aden
-Made the trees of verything edibe in that garden for the man
-He also created the tree of knowledge and evil
-Named the rivers: Pison, Gihon, Hiddekel,Euphrades
- Told the man that he could eat everythign he wanted except for the fruit of the good and evil tree: tree of life and tree of knowledge
-God realized that the man was alone
- Brought the animals and told the man to name them
- Adam did not find anothern man, so he put him to sleep, and took out one of his ribs
- From the rib he created woman, and he called her woman
-Marriage is created
-They live withought clothes and dont realize

Inferences About God:

Ch 1: 
-God is all mighty
-He already excisted 

Ch 2: 
-He can create life
- He can give responsability
-Cares more about man than animals
- He cares more about man because they are like him


OCTOBER 24

Topic: Writers Worlkshop
Aim: What is register? 
Is the way that you are writing your text, the way you express yourself. 
Revise our articles use of register
Write Now: How would you address the schools director? Explain
I would write a formal letter to the director expressing my idea in a clear and composed way. I would use complete language " no slamg" 

-REGISTER: is the manner of speaking or writing
Familiar, Informal, Formal, Ceremonial

Familiar Register: 
close rilationship between writer, topic, and audience 

Informal Register: Journalism, and is sometimes used in academic preformence. Colse relationship between wirter, audience and topic, but not as close as familiar. 
Use of "I" does not automaticly mak it informal. 

Formal: 
most academic text are writen. not colocial. not personal. opinions can be expressed but not subjective. Dont break any of written grammar.

Ceremonial Register: 
Rarely used in academic writing. Powerful impressions in audition. 

-TEXTS AND IDENTIFY REGISTER: 
1.Familiar: hi, puente, sick, 
2.Ceremonial: prevaled, freyed, presperity, testament, us
3.Familiar: OMG! i, yo, imoticon 
4.Formal/ subjective/infromal/ceremonial: lightweight, radience, spellbound, grainy
5.Informal: poitned out, overthroughn, goons, chaos

Revise my Oped
personal experience, beggining paragraph, 
- Title: The Back and White Side of Modern Technology on Humans

Technology has improved greatly though the past years. This has changed human life, as well as the enviornment, but how has technology chaged us really, possitivey or negatively? 




Topic: In the beginning
Aim: Who's to blame for the fall of man? 
Who is to blame is god because he created the tree of life.mThe snake did not know the tree was bad, and adam just wamted eve to be happy
Look Now: Titile this picture
Man and Woman like serpent

Beguiled: To trick
Emnity: hatred

God: Cretaed the serpent and the tree of life. Gave the man a way to be inpure, and gave him a wife. cretaed woman: "but of e tree of knowledge of good an evil thou ahalt not eat if it for in the day that thou eat thereof thoug shall surely die"

Adam: did what his wife told him to do. Did not ask from what tree was the fruit. Did not control his wife: he was told to take over his woman, though she took control of him
The woman who though gavest to be with me, she gave me of the tree, and i did eat. she did come from men he has to control him


Eve: Took the fruit, did what the cerpent asked her to do and against gods will, ate the fruit: fell to temptation

"and when the woman saw that the tree was good for food and that it was plesent to the eyes and atree to be desired to make one wise, she took the fruit, and did eat, and gave to her housband and he did eat"

Cerpent: Cnvinced eve to eat the fruit 
"for god doth know that in the day ye the eat there of, then your eyes shall be opened, and you shall be as gods, knowing good and evil"

The aunthour blames: 

Sunday, October 21, 2012

October

Topic: Writers Wokshop
Aim: What is an op-ed article?
Write Now: is a newspaper fact or opinion? 
I think that a newspaper is both, because the opinion is based on a fact, though made stonger or weaker
(argument) for the importance of the thought


Objetive Statemets: 
-Deadly european heat wave of 2003
-Russian heat wave of 2010
-50,000 people were killed in the european heat wave 

Subjective Statemets: 
-To count

TECHNOLOGY: DRAFT


Impact of  Technology on Human Life
By: Daniela Cepeda

Technology advances have been numerous throughout the past years. These have made humanity better, stronger, and smarter; or at least that’s what most people believe.

Life is better. The list of technological objects in ordinary life proofs that. "From the invention of first fire to the first wheel, today we can imagine our lives without a particular person but not without a particular technology system.” This has impacted every aspect of our lives. Today, everything is technology-driven, from how we cook (microwaves), to how we move (cars), to how we store (refrigerator) and finally to how we entertain (movies and televisions)." (http://www.helium.com/items/2314340-technologys-impact-on-society)


In Colombia, contrary to the United States, not every household has electric appliances, with the exception of television. This fact, prompted the 2012 report of Colombia’s statistics department (DANE) to conclude that “perhaps optimism to Colombians arrive via televisions, the most precious appliance for 91 of every 100 households surveyed, even over goods that could be more necessary as the refrigerator  (33 of every 100 households in the national total). Moreover, it is more important to pay the subscription to television (51.5 percent) than to by a computer (33.9 percent). The computer is a still a good sumptuous in rural areas, where it is present only in 5.8% of households, compared to 41.7% of urban households".



Humanity is stronger. Weapons made some states stronger, as was proven by the atomic bomb during the Second World War. But it also made humans stronger compared to other species, since we could defend ourselves with fire, knives and other weapons, as well as newer inventions used today. Humans may control nature thanks to technologies. For example, water is managed through damns, reservoirs, channels, bridges, etc. The cycle of night and day does not impede humans from having light at night, thanks to electricity, lamps and bulbs. Inventions made humans faster, through vehicles like bicycles, cars, airplanes, and ships, as well as powerful, through machines like the ones used in building construction.

Humans have become smarter. Books printed by machines facilitated the spread of knowledge. Radio and television expanded the access to information, even for those that cannot read. Complicated operations became easier thanks to calculators and modern computers. It has even been proven that “the scores in standardized test have improved in the United States in spite of the decline of school quality because of easy access to technology by kids at home “(Idea taken from “Everything Bad is Good for You: How Today's Popular Culture is Actually Making Us Smarter”, written by Steve Johnson, 2006)
" ICTs can assist humanitarian aid organizations. Logistic support, timely information, and immediate feedback from the concerned region enhance the focus and effectiveness of aid. Timely food distribution and ICT -enhanced coordination helped World Vision and its partners, for example, to avoid a catastrophe in parts of Southern Africa in the food crises of 2003."
(http://www.ifpri.org/sites/default/files/pubs/pubs/ib/ib27.pdf)
(http://www.ftpress.com/articles/article.aspx?p=30491). A recent study show that 84% of students use You Tube as an educational devise.( http://www.socialnomics.net/2011/06/22/how-to-get-better-grades-using-social-media/)



Technologies promote human communication. Devises like smart phones, or tablets keep you connected to browsers all the time, as well as Facebook, another way of human interaction. Studies show that technologies promote human communication. Connectivity has increased thanks to communication technologies, such as cable connections, as shown in Map 1. Studies show that 87% of smart phone owners use them to check the internet rather than their computers (http://m.nbcnews.com/technology/technolog/25-percent-use-smartphones-not-computers-majority-web-surfing-122259). Almost the double of young adults ages 18-24 use Facebook several times in a day (73%) compared to older adults ages 35-44 (38%).

Advances also involve medicine, and new solutions to solve problems like hunger etc. Thus, telemedicine is a hole new branch of medical practice. In fact, it is described by an encyclopedia as, “the use of telecommunication and information technologies in order to provide clinical health care at a distance. It helps eliminate distance barriers and can improve access to medical services that would often not be consistently available in distant rural communities. It is also used to save lives in critical care and emergency situations". (Http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Telemedicine). When famines occur, early alerts and coordination has helped to solve the crises.

For younger generations, technology is important in their basic education as well as life. Universities all around the world like MIT are now using Internet browsers and other media sources to communicate with students, teachers, and studies. Since students are constantly connected, they have many learning options, like Codecademy or even YouTube.

Universities use the Internet for administrative and academic activities. In fact, "the Internet is most commonly (and successfully) enriching and reinforcing "traditional" higher education in a variety of ways. For example, through campus Web portals, students can register for courses, make appointments to meet with advisors, check the syllabus for courses, reach everyone on campus through electronic bulletin boards and email, and check grades and exam schedules. Collaboration between faculty and students, which is so critical to the instructional process, is being made easier with Web discussion boards. Cooperation among faculty is being simplified as documents are shared online."

We have lots of ways of learning new information, which is constantly changing, as we are. Though, technology has a negative impact as well. Students at many universities are also getting distracted with sights like Facebook or Twitter while studying or testing. 65% of teenagers describe themselves as multi-taskers, according to Wallis. (The multitasking generation Time, (2006)). More than 40% of college classrooms, according to the Campus Computing Project, have the compulsion to multitask.


This phenomenon will increase as today’s children start entering into college. A 2005 survey of Americans age 8-18 by the Kaiser Family Foundation found that teenagers spent 8.5 hours to media exposure due to media multitasking.

Studies have shown that humans cannot multi-task, though many of these students claim they can. As an expert on cognition noted, “concentration and in-depth thought will be lost as the ability to multiprocess has its limits, even among young adults…., as errors go way up, and it takes far longer –often double the time or more--- to get the jobs done than if they were done sequentially” (David E. Meyer, Director of the Brain, Cognition and Action Laboratory at the University of Michigan). A person can only give full attention to one thing at a time (Study conducted by Elinor Ochs with 32 families).

Studies have also proven that the people who say they can multi-task, are the ones most distracted. “Multi-tasking may actually have adverse affects on the brain development of teenagers as parts of their brains are still developing, and it may lead to a lack of analytical skills and procrastination”, (www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article,2007, quoting Jordan Grafman, Chief of the National Institute of Neurological Disorders.) The problem with multi-tasking, like investigations show, is that the brain cannot give its full potential to one thing nor the other. If you are taking an exam, while hearing music, while Tweeting to your friends, does not let you do any of the things at your best intellectual level (www.fritzhubbard.org/words/The_Multitasking_Generation.pdf).


In more extreme cases, technology is said to be a disease throughout Asian countries, like Korea. In Korea, 30 million people are thought to play regularly, and 10% of South Korean school children have shown signs of video-game addiction.  (www.Time.com/world/article/0,8599,1983234,00.html).

Several citizens have died playing non-stop video games, and others in virtual centers. An organization, which focuses on game addiction, denounced that a 3-month-old baby starved to death while his parents were in an Internet café. A 22-year-old man murdered his mother who asked him to stop playing. In 2005, a 28-year-old man went into cardiac arrest after playing for 50 hours, and other 10 people died for causes related to game addiction (www.video-game addiction.org). Technology addicts are already being treaded in special centers, where they can find themselves through nature, instead of video games. There are already more than 100 clinics to treat video game addiction. According to researchers of the National Institute on Media and the Family, showed that already 1 out of 10 video game players shows signs of addictive behavior (www.video-game addiction.org).

Some people have been able to recover, though others keep on playing for the rest of their lives. On the other hand, pre-schools in Korea are now being based on technology. In Korea, the so-called R-learning system consists of teachers, young children, robots and the interactive infrastructure mixed with wireless devices to create an optimal educational environment. From a young age, children are being thought how to use these new study places. (Oh Sang-Rok. At school with robots. Wwww.temi.republica.it/limes-heartland). Thus, technology may use it for good and not for bad. Results show that these systems will continue to expand and save lots of kids from getting this epidemic.

In conclusion, technology will not make up humanity, but humanity will improve by making technology.


Thursday, October 18, 2012

OCTOBER 18


Topic: Writers Wokshop
Aim: What is an op-ed article?(opinion article not written by the editors)
Write Now: is a newspaper fact (objective) or opinion( subjective)? 
I think that a newspaper is both, because the opinion is based on a fact, though made stonger or weaker
(argument) for the importance of the thought


  • Objective and Subjective in Article
Objetive Statemets: 
-Deadly european heat wave of 2003
-Russian heat wave of 2010
-50,000 people were killed in the european heat wave 

Subjective Statemets: 
-To count on those odds would be like quitting your job and playing the lottery every morning to pay the bills
- But I have a confesison to make: I was to optimistic
-The future is now. And it is hot. 


  • 3 subjective ideas from me: 
-Facebook is controling modern society
-Technology is good for humanity but bad also
- Chocolate is food for you
- The food in the cafeteria should be better

Drafting:
Technology advances have ben numerus thruh the past years. This have made humanity better, stronger, and smarter; or at least thats what most people believe. Technologies like iPhone or iPad keep you connected to broisers all the time, as well as facebook, another way of human interaction. Asvances also involve medicine, and new solutions to world problems like hunger etc. For younger generations, technology is important in their basic education as well as life. Universities al around thw world are now using internt brousers and other media spurces to communicate with students, teachers, and studies. Since students are constantly connected, they have many learning options, like codecademy or even youtube. We have lots of ways of learning new information that is comstantly changing, as we are. Though, technology has a negative impact as well. Students at many universities are also gettig distracted with sights like Facebook or Twitter while studying or testing. Studies have shown that humans cant multi-task, though many of this students claim they can. Studies have also proven that the people who say this are the ones that are most distracted. The problem with multi-tasking, like investigations show, is thatthe brain cannot give its ful potential to one thing nore the other. If you are taking an exam, while hearing music, while Tweeting to your friends does not let you do any of the thre things at your best intellectual level. In more extreme cases, technology is said to be a desease throughout Asian coutres, like Korea. Several citizens have died playing non stop video games, and others in virtual centers. Technology  addicts re already being tread in sprcial camps where they can find themselves though nature, instead of video games. Some people have been able to recover, though other keep on playing for the rest of their life. On the other hand, pre-schools in Korea are now being based on technology. From a young age, children are beng tought hos to ise technology, but also how to use it for good and not for bad. Results show that this system will comtinew to expand and save lots of kids from getting this epidemic. In conclusion, technology will not make up humanity, but humanty wil complement it. 


  • Objective and Subjective Statements on the Video Blog:

Objective:
-Difference you saw something and recording someone

Subjectve:
-God you believe is decreacing ( religion, belief is decreacing) 
-Recrding people is an important question

Question: Why do newspapers publish op-ed articles
I think they do because they can convince people that what they are pertraying is true: make their opinion a fact in the minds of  the reader. 

Thursday, September 20, 2012

September 20

What is a time frame in comics?
a frame that is not just in a single moment but several seconds of movement

How does the large panel on page 95 demonstrate McClouds point about time in comics.
It shows how everything can be drawn at the same time but different things actually happening in each of the different times because even when people talk it takes time.

Cite one example from their chapter of time being shown in motion within frame
The man jumping the hurdle because fit shows the act of jumping while taking several seconds to watch it.

Define vague. Explain its meaning on page 100.
Vague is when our eyes are moving thru time and space but we don't know how much.

In what order are comics read? Where do we learn this?
Comics are read from right to left , we know this because this also happens in tv of movies as well as cartoons.

Decribe three different ways time has been depicted in comics
-Size of the box: if the box is smaller the brain might think not that much time has passed.
-Frameless: box without frames means it is timeless
-Pannel is of the page means it is timeless but shown in a more abstract way.

Create a sequence of panels for your comic that demonstrates the movement of time. Be sure to do different panel shaped and also include one example of time moving within the frame and the other moving outside of frames. Use colors or markers.